All you "Jack and Sara" fans from the summer TAKE HEART! The story will emerge at the end of the month. In the meantime, feast your eyes on this telling moment in the head of one Super Alpha, Jack Gordon, the reluctant Dom...




Jack closed his laptop and headed out the door to his next appointment, feeling at the top of his game, but with a small, annoying tickle in the back of his brain still whispering Sara’s name. Brushing a hand over his already rough jaw, he pondered his options. One thing was clear. It was time to act. He tamped down the urge to take the direct route, scoop her up for a nice long weekend of bonding at his house. No, she needed to realize that she wanted it first.



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22 comments

  1. Jessica Subject  

    Oh, like it already. Great six! :)

  2. Lisa Fox  

    I am already hooked! Great snippet!

  3. mirriamsmyth  

    That last line is a great hook! Nice six!

  4. Kallypso Masters  

    An Alpha man with a plan. Although I love it best when things don't quite work out as planned. Nice Six and good luck on the release!

    Kally

  5. Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich  

    Nicely done, Liz. I really liked his excitement with "Sara", yet his interest in prolonging the game by waiting for her to acknowledge her need. Great six and congrats on your upcoming release! :)

  6. Sherry Gloag  

    Great six, and loved your final line.

  7. Laura Kaye  

    Ooh, love a take-charge guy! Fun six!

  8. Gem Sivad  

    Big congrats on your upcoming release! His dominance comes through very well in this six.

  9. sue  

    It's a good plan - will it work out?

  10. Monica Enderle Pierce  

    Huh. I hope she's gonna knock him down a peg or two.

  11. Kellie Kamryn  

    I like how this makes me want to see how he puts this plan into action! Great 6 :)

  12. An Open Book  

    What a perfect scene- still my heart and Liz, I told you, get me Jack's number- lol


    Dawne

  13. Patricia Green  

    "Bonding"... I love it. Great 6!

  14. Lex Valentine  

    He does seem very Alpha!

  15. The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre  

    Ah yes, the alpha-dog, but this time with a master plan. Awesome Six.

  16. Nichelle Gregory  

    I wonder if he'll be patient and wait for her to see things his way. ;) Love the new look of your blog too!

  17. Bonnie Bliss  

    OH how do I love men that TAKE instead of asking! So delicious and yummy!

  18. diannehartsock  

    I think his patience with her has a chance of paying off in the end! I like a man who can wait for what he wants.

  19. Vivien Dean  

    I love his attitude. Thanks for sharing!

  20. Krystal Wade  

    Oh, he's going to toy with her, but in a good way. Loves!

  21. Alix  

    love love love your six!

  22. JoAnne Kenrick  

    Sweet! A man with a plan, I'm dying to find out how he sweeps her off her feet the nontraditional way ;0) Great six, Liz!

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